دن گزر جاتا ہے۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔
Subah uth’tey hee
Khud se jhagra karti hon
Khana thunda khati hon
Paani garam peeti hon
Phir dil ko behlati hon
Chalo aaj sawiyan bnatey hain
Khata ho janey waley nishaney lagatey hain
3 months se Sadia se baat nahi hoi
Zara sabar karo abhi raat nahi hoi
Abhi chand warq baci hain es kitab kay
Saqi na ho razi tu pilaye kon ghont sharab kay?
Marna bhol gye ho kya ?
chalo nimaz parh lo
Ankhain surkh kion hain?
Kuch wazahtain garh lo
Myra khyal hae dear abhi kafi kaam rehtey hain
Muhabbat?? Wo jis kay dukh aksar sehtay hain?
Phir……..
Sar-e-raat monh-zor jazbay ghertay hain
yadon kay rukh tujh tarf moortay hain
Main jaan bhoj kay haar jati hon
Aqal ko chorr ,junoon kay paar jati hon
Lafz jorr jorr kay ek pyam likhti hon
Tujh ko sun’ney ki khawahish teray naam likhti hon
Barey Ahtemam se PHIR
‘send’ se pehlay ‘delete’ dbati hon
Apni Muhabbat harati hon
Tumhara ‘faisla’ jtati hon !!!
(Nayni)
— Mujhey sab se ziada maza ’sach’ bolnay mae aata hae ( jee jee aap ko bhi aata hae )… Sach ko ‘edit’ kr diya jate tu wo sach rehta hae kya ?? please myrey lafzoon ko sirf ‘izhar’ samjha jaye POETRY nahi … wysey tu mujhey izhar bhi nahi aata ..izhar se pehlay hunsi aa jati hae hehehehehe aur izhar ka ’satyanaas’ ho jata hae … hahahahahaha……Aap mae se ziada tar khushqismat log hain jo mujhey parhtey hain suntey nahi
….
When I think about ‘him’ , I feel so good hehehehe…. A smile comes on my face with tears in my eyes … aur phir apney aap se saada saada fights ….. uff kash mae thuri ‘complicated’ hoti
‘Lafz’ kesay thay ?
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You made me sort of melancholic!! And thats enough of the proof of the sincerity in your words. Waisay poetry izhaar kay ilawa koi cheez hay kya?
Your words were poetic, captivatingly poetic!
Ab mai kia kehun…
@ Aadil
aap ka yeh comment ayk ‘post’ mangta hae
Intizar farmain
@ Tauqeer
‘acha acha sa’ kuch bhi
kamaal thay … poetry from life’s day and night are one of the best pieces …
oh i’m reading it again
Sar-e-raat monh-zor jazbay ghertay hain
yadon kay rukh tujh tarf moortay hain
Main jaan bhoj kay haar jati hon
Aqal ko chorr ,junoon kay paar jati hon
Lafz jorr jorr kay ek pyam likhti hon
Tujh ko sun’ney ki khawahish teray naam likhti hon
Lovely
i really really really loved some of those lines. there were really beautiful thoughts inter-woven with a superficially casual expression…
do you know that you can write beautifully if you get a bit serious about it ?
iss baar delete matt dabaiiyay, send kar dijiye… achha ho ga…
@ Asma
Thank you !
@ Cavaliere
Thank you so much
myra SYSTEM thura kharab hae
’serious’ nahi hoa jata
Abhi yeh non-serious halaat hain…
@ Tauqeer
Main khud dua mangti hon k mae ’serious’ naa hon kabhi bhi